What is bad with his Fanfiction Story? About making one, in general? I too think, the SSJ5 State could have been designed a little bit cooler. Like with not every Piece of Fur of the SSJ4 State vanishing, but it's to late and Malik already had designed his own Idea.
And honestly, it's soooooooooo much cooler than the shitty Wannabe-"GOD"-States, that are just the usual Characters with embarrassingly colored Hair. Honestly?? Goku and Vegeta with Red or Blue Hair - and that is supposed to be a " GOD-State " ?? What for a Child on Drugs came up with THAT Idea?? x))
God states sucks too.. But the worst its SSj4 and next.. Its not a question of taste,.. Gt sucks, like SSj4, the manga Dragon Ball finish with the train of Uub.. The best is the Ssj,SSj2 an SSj3.. Next its for retard kid
Here's a trick I learned when filling the gray spots, if you use photoshop, and select spots with a magic wand like I do, try using Select, got to modify, and then expand. It'll make those lines seem cleaner. Just trying to spread some helpful advice, your comics are awesome!