What is bad with his Fanfiction Story? About making one, in general? I too think, the SSJ5 State could have been designed a little bit cooler. Like with not every Piece of Fur of the SSJ4 State vanishing, but it's to late and Malik already had designed his own Idea.
And honestly, it's soooooooooo much cooler than the shitty Wannabe-"GOD"-States, that are just the usual Characters with embarrassingly colored Hair. Honestly?? Goku and Vegeta with Red or Blue Hair - and that is supposed to be a " GOD-State " ?? What for a Child on Drugs came up with THAT Idea?? x))