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DBNA CH28 pg1 by MalikStudios DBNA CH28 pg1 by MalikStudios
After the next page, I'm going to take a small break from Chapter 28 to focus on the redraws from the earlier chapters so I can dedicate myself to the main story full time once again.

NOTE: New dialogue added 8-4-13
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:iconadhisrf:
It could have had the dbz feel even more if goku had a wry smile in the second last panel.coz he is always smiling like heh you are bad,but some one will take you down kind thing
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:icongohanssj6:
gohan looks different
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:iconvincedabarber:
im on the edge of my seat here haha
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Nassif9000 Jan 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
weeklytubeshow piccolo: AW SHIAT MUTHAFUCKA! O_O somebody's gotta save goku's ass! dis mothafucka's gon' kill'm!
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Thrubardockeyes Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
okay because its werid having both I prefeir one or the other. Yes closer too truhan
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:iconsikera:
Come on, Vegeta! I know you're still fighting in there!
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:iconsilverhedgehog2009:
shit come guy you better horry get there be it to late
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Averant Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is great, Malik. One suggestion, perhaps? I think(just my opinion, anyways)
if you add a period after "YES" in the last panel, I think it would add more impact
to the statement. Just a thought. Kickass story so far. Can't wait to see what
happens next. :D
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:iconlahis:
Your dedication to redraw older pages is at the same time both admirable and annoying. With the redraws the quality of the story will be kept constant all around (The first chapters flow now much, much better than they did before the most recent redraw) but it comes with the oblivious price of hindering the progress of the current chapter. I doubt I'm the only who will be here anxiously waiting for the next page in CH28 while you finish the redraws :P
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