This is great, Malik. One suggestion, perhaps? I think(just my opinion, anyways) if you add a period after "YES" in the last panel, I think it would add more impact to the statement. Just a thought. Kickass story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Your dedication to redraw older pages is at the same time both admirable and annoying. With the redraws the quality of the story will be kept constant all around (The first chapters flow now much, much better than they did before the most recent redraw) but it comes with the oblivious price of hindering the progress of the current chapter. I doubt I'm the only who will be here anxiously waiting for the next page in CH28 while you finish the redraws